Tuesday, 28 March 2017

Marking previous work

CAPTIVE 58/60
MATERIAL APPROPRIATE TO TARGET AUDIENCE
Level 4 10/10
Fits and successfully displays conventions of horror/thriller
TITLES CONVENTIONAL/APPROPRIATE
Level 4 10/10
Titles appropriate to genre and unobtrusive/distracting.
SOUND/IMAGES AND TECHNICAL EDITING
Level 4 10/10
Smooth continuity editing. Glitch cut suits genre/ shown plot line.
CAMERA WORK/FRAMING/VARIETY OF SHOT TYPES/ MISE EN SCENE
Level 4 10/10
Excellent use of framing, mise-en-scene appropriate to genre, variety of shots.
EDITING FOR MEANING/ TRANSITIONS EFFECTS
Level 4 10/10
Editing contributes meaning and context to story/atmosphere.
OVERALL FEEL
Level 4 8/10
Feels slightly like a trailer.


FACELESS 52/60 


MATERIAL APPROPRIATE TO TARGET AUDIENCE
Level 4 10/10
Creative use of genre codes and conventions
TITLES CONVENTIONAL/APPROPRIATE
Level 3 7/10
Fragmented text appropriate to genre and doesn't draw attention away from scene, but some are too discrete/fast - doesn't allow audience to read the text.
SOUND/IMAGES AND TECHNICAL EDITING
Level 4 9/10
Excellent use of sound - sound matched up with images well.
CAMERA WORK/FRAMING/VARIETY OF SHOT TYPES/ MISE EN SCENE
Level 4 8/10
Wide variety of shots, good framing, and suitable miser en scene.
EDITING FOR MEANING/ TRANSITIONS EFFECTS
Level 4 10/10
Seamless continuity editing - editing was unnoticed.
OVERALL FEEL
Level 4 8/10
Appropriate feel, but tried to fit too much into a small time frame.


RIVALRY 39/50



MATERIAL APPROPRIATE TO TARGET AUDIENCE
Level 4 8/10
Creative use of gangster film genre codes and iconography.
TITLES CONVENTIONAL/APPROPRIATE
Level 4 8/10
Excellent style of titles suited for gangster film, but the final title was way too fast for audiences to read.
SOUND/IMAGES AND TECHNICAL EDITING
Level 3 6/10
Good, original music, but sound of dialogue was unclear.
CAMERA WORK/FRAMING/VARIETY OF SHOT TYPES/ MISE EN SCENE
Level 3 5/10
Good mise en scene, but repetitive shots and some framing issues.
EDITING FOR MEANING/ TRANSITIONS EFFECTS
Level 3 5/10
Indiscrete editing in places - some did add to atmosphere/genre conventions, but some match action was off.
OVERALL FEEL
Level 3 7/10
Appropriate feel, but tried to fit too much into a small time frame. Felt slightly like a trailer.


ISSUES I NEED TO CONSIDER
For my final film opening, I need to pay attention to framing, editing (for technicalities and for meaning), to mise en scene, and to get music suited to the images, making sure they match.

1 comment:

  1. This is excellent Deana and I think it might be worth documenting more about what you learned from this experience and how it impacted on your opening. I'm sure there is a place for this in your evaluation.

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