MATERIAL APPROPRIATE TO TARGET AUDIENCE
Level 4 10/10
Fits and successfully displays conventions of horror/thrillerTITLES CONVENTIONAL/APPROPRIATE
Level 4 10/10
Titles appropriate to genre and unobtrusive/distracting.
SOUND/IMAGES AND TECHNICAL EDITING
Level 4 10/10
Smooth continuity editing. Glitch cut suits genre/ shown plot line.
CAMERA WORK/FRAMING/VARIETY OF SHOT TYPES/ MISE EN SCENE
Level 4 10/10
Excellent use of framing, mise-en-scene appropriate to genre, variety of shots.
EDITING FOR MEANING/ TRANSITIONS EFFECTS
Level 4 10/10
Editing contributes meaning and context to story/atmosphere.
OVERALL FEEL
Level 4 8/10
Feels slightly like a trailer.
FACELESS 52/60
MATERIAL APPROPRIATE TO TARGET AUDIENCE
Level 4 10/10
Creative use of genre codes and conventions
TITLES CONVENTIONAL/APPROPRIATELevel 3 7/10
Fragmented text appropriate to genre and doesn't draw attention away from scene, but some are too discrete/fast - doesn't allow audience to read the text.
SOUND/IMAGES AND TECHNICAL EDITING
Level 4 9/10
Excellent use of sound - sound matched up with images well.
CAMERA WORK/FRAMING/VARIETY OF SHOT TYPES/ MISE EN SCENE
Level 4 8/10
Wide variety of shots, good framing, and suitable miser en scene.
EDITING FOR MEANING/ TRANSITIONS EFFECTS
Level 4 10/10
Seamless continuity editing - editing was unnoticed.
OVERALL FEEL
Level 4 8/10
Appropriate feel, but tried to fit too much into a small time frame.
RIVALRY 39/50
MATERIAL APPROPRIATE TO TARGET AUDIENCE
Level 4 8/10
Creative use of gangster film genre codes and iconography.
TITLES CONVENTIONAL/APPROPRIATELevel 4 8/10
Excellent style of titles suited for gangster film, but the final title was way too fast for audiences to read.
SOUND/IMAGES AND TECHNICAL EDITING
Level 3 6/10
Good, original music, but sound of dialogue was unclear.
CAMERA WORK/FRAMING/VARIETY OF SHOT TYPES/ MISE EN SCENE
Level 3 5/10
Good mise en scene, but repetitive shots and some framing issues.
EDITING FOR MEANING/ TRANSITIONS EFFECTS
Level 3 5/10
Indiscrete editing in places - some did add to atmosphere/genre conventions, but some match action was off.
OVERALL FEEL
Level 3 7/10
Appropriate feel, but tried to fit too much into a small time frame. Felt slightly like a trailer.
ISSUES I NEED TO CONSIDER
For my final film opening, I need to pay attention to framing, editing (for technicalities and for meaning), to mise en scene, and to get music suited to the images, making sure they match.
This is excellent Deana and I think it might be worth documenting more about what you learned from this experience and how it impacted on your opening. I'm sure there is a place for this in your evaluation.
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